In case anyone out there is worried, yes, this is still a superhero comic :).
The original script for this page called for Michelle to be much meaner than the final product but I decided to change it, she came across as a big bully towards Carrie and she’s not really that bad- hopefully Carrie’s “icy” greeting brings home the fact that there’s some established tension between the two classmates but it’s not like they need to have 20/20 school bullying expose or anything. And I don’t want to flat out give it away but there is something pretty important you should pick up on in that 3rd panel.
A shout out again goes out to freelance writer extraordinare Robert Jeffrey for acting as an editor this week. You can find his comic book work at http://www.terminusmedia.com/, home of “Daddy’s Little Girl”, and his writing blog is at http://robertspageofwriting.blogspot.com/. He’s also got an exciting project coming down the pipe in conjunction with fellow writer Milton Davis but I’m not going to spill the beans on that one.
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