Issue 1, Page 10
5 responses to “Issue 1, Page 10”
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Ah, something new has been added.
A rival for Terminus City’s underworld, perhaps?
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Perhaps…
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but you don’t explain how he got his name. You could have had the newspapers say something like “Stealthy Vigilante Stops Crime Without a Trace” or just have him meet up with the press and just make something up on the spot. Instead we find out that there is some sort of gap between his origin and now. If you’re going to give him an origin give him a full origin or none at all.
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I’ve got a Year One-type story (more like Month One) planned that explains the name and some other little details.
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Awesome. Can’t wait to see it.
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