Issue 03, Page 16

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Issue 03, Page 16

In the spirit of full disclosure, I have no idea what Allen would go on to say from there if not interrupted :). It’s a minor detail but I thought showing that Ashley knows about Allen’s dad (even if it slipped her mind as she’s caught up in her own issues) would help show the level of friendly relationship they have. Its one of those things that make sense to me as the creator but I always worry the reader might not pick up on bits like that. Any thoughts?

13 responses to “Issue 03, Page 16”

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  2. David Avatar

    It works. This whole page seem (and I mean this in a good way) very One Tree Hill. Protagonist and Love Interest A talk then Love Interest B interupts says her quip, then we cut to commercial.

    I really like that. Very cool!

    1. William Satterwhite Avatar
      William Satterwhite

      Thanks man, you hit the nail on the head with the One Tree Hill comment. I’ve always tried to give the comic the feel of a Dawson’s Creek or One Tree Hill-type teen drama/soap opera, except with superpowers :).

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  6. JRCarter Avatar
    JRCarter

    Awkward…

    1. William Satterwhite Avatar
      William Satterwhite

      Awkward…

      Would you expect anything less from the first time all three characters appear together in the same scene :).

  7. AnonymousReader Avatar
    AnonymousReader

    just a drop by, saying it’s cool.

    started from the start, tuning in every now and then to see what’s up

    peace

    1. William Satterwhite Avatar
      William Satterwhite

      Thanks for dropping by and checking the comic out. Feel free to let me know what you think about anything, I always appreciate the feedback!

  8. […] if this page starts off a bit confusing to anyone, it’s basically picks up immediately after this one. I’ve the two hours obsessing over how much I’ve come to think the effect I was going […]

  9. Rob Avatar
    Rob

    Wow…just wow…they’re talking about her father issues, then Allen’s dead father comes into the conversation, now Carrie’s walking in pissed about Allen ignoring her. It’s official. This is the most awkward moment in a webcomic. Ever. And I love it.

    1. William Satterwhite Avatar
      William Satterwhite

      Thanks man, any time I can push the envelop of awkwardness to newlevels I know I’ve done a good job!

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