In the spirit of full disclosure, I have no idea what Allen would go on to say from there if not interrupted :).

It’s a minor detail but I thought showing that Ashley knows about Allen’s dad (even if it slipped her mind as she’s caught up in her own issues) would help show the level of friendly relationship they have. Its one of those things that make sense to me as the creator but I always worry the reader might not pick up on bits like that. Any thoughts?

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