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Issue 02, Page 08
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Issue 02, Page 08

Apologies again for another late update, the art was done for this one on time but I’ve spent the last week re-writing the dialogue because I wasn’t real happy with it. I’m still not really happy with the final dialogue but hopefully it at least conveys everything its supposed to get across here.

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4 thoughts to “Issue 02, Page 08”

  1. Hey Robert, thanks for checking in. Regarding the dialogue, it probably ended up for the best but I really chopped down and condense a lot of what I had originally written and the overall pacing of the scene was actually different from the final result (same basic endpoint, just two different paths). Again, it was probably for the best but it just led to a lot of back and forth here and there.

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